 AmPhire 2009-10-16 . chapter 8Love the story! |
 Pixie-Flick 2009-10-13 . chapter 8I really loved this story and there aren't many stories on that I can say that about. I liked the way you didn't end it with an established pairing and the points you made about beauty really hit home.
Lovely work, I can't wait to see more from you.
~Pixie-Flick~ |
 Sakuraangel1327 2009-09-26 . chapter 8Angh, but we dont no anything, cause hes moving away and we dont no if they get together, or if Sasuke finds his brother or anything. So many things arent tied off. Please make another chapter or a sequel cause i think it needs it to make it an awesomer (its a word now) story. XD |
 Stevie Ollie 2009-09-13 . chapter 8I have read quite a few Fanfiction stories, and was pretty convinced there was no author that could absolutely stun me. You however continue to take my breathe away, and this story just gave me chills. I'm sure you already know how skilled you are, but i really want to know if you realize what good use you could put your incredible talent to. I'm very serious when i ask say this, but have you ever considered writing a book? Really, when i read the first chapter, i thought, my god if this was a book i was skimming through in a book store, i would have bought 10 copies and given them to the first people i met. It would be my christmas/birthday/hanuka present to everyone i knew for the rest of the year. I know this all probably sounds very silly but really. Don't just write these short stories, go for something big!!
Your incredible, as are your creations, and everyone should know.
Keep it up! |
 yellowcamaro 2009-08-07 . chapter 8Aww, *Sniff* It's kind of weird for me since it didn't end up in an actual couple but it was a great story nonetheless :)
it was really well-written and i loved that twist especially ! ^^ |
 Karasu Chiyuki 2009-07-30 . chapter 8this is really good. |
 DestinyIntertwined 2009-07-28 . chapter 8Very intriguing story! I really liked how this ended up and how you changed it from it being a full on kibasaku story. Not having a direct pairing gives the story more meaning to it in my opinion. Overall very enjoyable. Nicely Done! ^_^ |
 DestinyIntertwined 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Quoting The Tragedy of Julius Caesar by William Shakespeare I see
Very Nice! ^_^ |
 kallou 2009-07-19 . chapter 8great story |
 BlackMage16 2009-07-16 . chapter 8That was really good. i really enjoyed that. it was quite different to some of the stories I usually read. But it was realy enjoyable. I'm glad you stuck to your guns about the no pairing thing, tho. :D |
 crimsonstain 2009-07-07 . chapter 8i thought this was a totally awesome-o story. great job. i was a little iffy about it, but...yeah, i like it. great job, and keep up the good work! |
 Tenpanda~ 2009-07-01 . chapter 8 This story is so amazing.
And the ending was great. Even though kiba was so twisted, i couldnt find myself to hate him. |
 Hatake Tsughi 2009-06-30 . chapter 8Interesting story. I love Kiba Sakura, there should have been more of them, less Sasuke. But that's just my opinion. Good job writing the chemistry between Kiba and Sakura they were totally hot together. |
 -Lazy IDP- 2009-05-30 . chapter 8I LOVED IT!! it was sick and twisted and funny at the same time!! I dont know how you did that but keep it up! |
 blah0ily. 2009-05-23 . chapter 8this story = _< |