I like the part when Hawk and BJ come back into The Swamp. I can really picture it. It's nice to find a fan fic about MASH that points out it wasn't all smooth sailing when the guys came home. Great story. Hope there's going to be more.
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I loved the dialogue! I thought it was near perfect, especially B.J.'s lines. Trapper's note sounded like something he'd write..short and to the point. Good work.