Very well done! I've written a Trapper letter too lately (although mine wasn't as good as yours, I think) and I was wondering if I was the only one. I like your fic much more, though, because of the way you incorporated not just the letter, but their life in Korea. Loved it!

Very nice, thank you!

Very in character XD loved it!

I like the part when Hawk and BJ come back into The Swamp. I can really picture it. It's nice to find a fan fic about MASH that points out it wasn't all smooth sailing when the guys came home. Great story. Hope there's going to be more.

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I loved the dialogue! I thought it was near perfect, especially B.J.'s lines. Trapper's note sounded like something he'd write..short and to the point. Good work.