   aile-chan 1/20/10 . chapter 2this is so good, u need to write more! |
| BFP 3/3/05 . chapter 1 Pity I can't go back in time to tell you how much it sucked and that the second chapter was really not necessary. |
| Legolas Anime Luver 7/21/03 . chapter 2 Hurry and make new chapters soon! |
| Taiora Daikari 5/6/02 . chapter 2 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WRITE MORE A-SAP! DON'T KILL MARAI TRUNKS PLEASE! HALO MORE A-SAP! |
| snapdragon 4/6/02 . chapter 2 i really like the storry so far but don't kill him i think you have a good grasp of future trunks personality |
| thepaxilfairy 3/15/02 . chapter 2 WAHHHHHHHHH! YOU MADE ME CRY!
That was good though. |
| Professor Authordude 2/1/02 . chapter 2 WOW that was good, please do more. |
| leelee3 1/9/02 . chapter 2 Hurry up! Write more! Got to know if he...lives! |
| Stormy 1/4/02 . chapter 2 GACK! Of COURSE I want to read more! I hope part 3 is coming soon! |
| HELPtheEVILchimpsATEmySOCKS 12/29/01 . chapter 2 I WANT MORE!1 |
| Professor Authordude 12/21/01 . chapter 2 Yes, I do want more please update! |
| lil' Chi Chi 12/6/01 . chapter 2 Please write more! I am in such suspense. It's killing me. MORE MORE MORE...ACK...WRITE MORE! PLEEEAAASSSEEE...
CHOW! |
| anya 12/2/01 . chapter 2 yes please, i really want more, its so good |
| SSJ Nanz 12/1/01 . chapter 2 WAAAAAAAAAAAA! MIRAI-TRUNKS-SAMA! NOOOOOOOOO! *eyes glow red* He had better live or else! *glares at a tree and sets it on fire with just looking at it* |
| Princess Tyler Briefs 12/1/01 . chapter 2 Ty: !*passes out*
Puppymon: Is she done yet? |
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