Hi! That was so good. You should really write a story about that!
My favorite animal is a wolf and I love to write stories about wolves and other animals too. I thought that was one of the best short stories I've ever read!
The only mistake i saw was ". . . the animal to be lifeless on the ground in its jaws."
But other then that, I thought that was so great!




(by the way, I'm from Australia) > <
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Nice.

WOW,I didn't realize anyone else played these games! I loved Lion/Wolf when I was a kid, and reading your story brought back a lot of the functions of the game. The only criticism I can offer is that wolves don't spend a lot of time crouched as a cat would, but they do crouch and pounce on occasion, especially on smaller prey. Great short story!

Hm, very good. Reading this, I was really able to see the hunt of the hare from the wolf's point of view. Do you intend to follow up on this with more chapters? I'd reall like to see more of the wolf's life. Can't wait to read more of your work! ^^

I think this was pretty good. You DO like writing about/drawing wolves, so it's nice that there's a catagory for it now. =D

I look forward to a long story on wolves! :) Keep up your regular good work!

Very descriptive and good and stuff.

I never knew there actually was a 'Wolf stories' category. :S

Good oneshot. Keep up the good work.