Whoakay, where's the rest of this? I wanna read this and I can't because there's no 'Next' button. You're killing me. So unless you want this psycho to burn your house down (yes I know where you live) you had better update soon :D. Much love and knitted cupcakes! xx

puh-lease rite more update update i love it

Loved it! :D Please, write more (:

I

Need

to

know

if

some one

dies

or

if

everyone

lives

with

seldom

love

in heart

now

thanks.

This is so weird, but pretty awesome and creepy! I hope that you'll update soon!

Please can you update soon yes update soon? she said for your benifit! lol soz couldnt help it! so can you?

Hey, this s really good so far... Is there gonna be an update any time soon?

:O

oi, two updates in one day - thanks! )

- "Frank rose of his chair and slammed my kitchen door shut before he turned around to answer me. "Okay, firstly..."

loved that. yes frank, get mad!

- "...I soon rolled him over so that I was on top, mirroring his actions, as if I was saying, 'leave Oli' but instead of saying it, I dry humped him instead."

ha! yeah... exactly. ;-D

nice one.

What? You can't stop THERE!

Haha. Nice update. Can't wait til the next!

XOXO Sweet Coldkiss

oh well, i'm waiting for him to say something too...

hehe, the "parasite" - great ;-D

:O

oh...my...god thats all i have to say... oh...my...god

isn't that weird?: the sentence that totally caught me was "Nothing was funny about this" because i so felt with gerard there and then when i clicked on the review button i saw you named the chapter like that too... weird

oh god, matt - seduce oli or oli - do something evil and brake frank's heart - i need frerard here!

FROLI!

but... but Frerard...

still though -FROLI! :D

...Frerard :'(

Aww gorgeous wee update -poor Gee though!

Ha -loved it though when Frank screamed at Matt though and then Oli pounced on him ;D

Tasty.

Lol -why the heck did Matt find that so freakin' funny?

Ooh he is SO dead for hitting on Oli though!

Can't wait for another update -quality writing! Love it!