oh man! the idea of Mohinder as a evil crazy scientist running the Company is a wonderful idea. I loved this story and you did a perfect evil Mohinder.

I just Llove the way you describe Mohinder in this fic. Well, I adore him as the lovely, calm Mohinder but gotta admit that the evil Mohinder is just plainly hot. I love the way the writers make him in season 3, with all those powers and else. I actually wonder what would happen if Mohinder actually shows his ruthless side more than his lovely side. As I wonder, I found this fic.

And the last part...wow, I just can't say enough. Maybe a sweet Mohinder is much better for the world of heroes after all. This is so amazing and thanks for sharing it with us.

cool fic

Wow, this is one great story, maybe u should consider a prequel and the continue throught this plot all the way into a a story of...oh i dont know, 300.0 words? :D

aw...man

this was good but i would have liked him to stay evil

but Hiro was so cool

tks for posting

... was that the 5-point exploding heart technique? hehee! Great story, I love the characterizations. I love that Hiro is going around saving the world one person at a time. And a great insight into Mohinder, how things would have changed drastically with just one difference.

this was the best thing i have read on Mohinder

i love this evil but suave version of him

and to know that he controls Gabriel & Elle like lackies is amazing

you written an excellent fic

enjoyed it very much sad to see Pete in this dead but i love how he made Nathan obey his wishes like a dog

God bless and keep writing

So, this took ages to get through, but so worth it. Mohinder is my favorite character (this season notwithstanding, writers suck), and this is a terrific look at what could have been. And kudos to the Mohinder&Molly moments. Love it!

This was... incredible. A beautifully cohesive, well-thought-out AU that all hinges on one little personality change (though I don't know if I'd categorize your Mohinder as "turning evil" so much as I'd say he "turned competent".) I noticed several little errors which you should maybe comb through for, but they weren't terribly distracting because this fic was so damn good.

I do wish you had divided it into chapters, though. It would have been easier to read, I think, if you chopped it up into three or four bits, as is it's intimidatingly huge. Honestly, oneshots of this length often scare me away (something which I assume is true for others as well), but in this case I'm very glad I got over my trepidation, as this one one of the most unique Heroes fics I've ever read.

(Not to mention how nice it is to see a Mohinder who doesn't screw up all the time!)