Very charming. :)

I've had a lot of authors portraying Fanzone as an unfriendly old grump, so finding this was rather delightful.
Thank you.

Nice, techno-hating Fanzone depending on Optimus for a ride. I like it.

GO OPTIMUS! sorry me like Optimus Prime! he is COOL! now bout the story...COOL AS WELL!

this was good =)

you had Fanzone's personality down good too =)

Very funny.