Hi, thanks for writing NR, it's always nice to take a break from life every now and then and read something enjoyable. Unfortunately I'll never be able to paw pads with Presea, since I couldn't ever get that skit to trigger for that title .. Hopefully she'll be able to get her Klonoa outfit (Wahoo) sometime in the NR timeline to make up for it. With the game script officially messed up I wonder how the gang will get past the Tower of Salvation now with the lack of Genis/Mithos bonding time...hm...unless that was intentional? Anyway, thanks for writing and hope to hear from you soon!

Well, stuff is starting to hit the fan.

Been reading this off and on (probably like most the reader's) Have JUST reread it, And I still love it. Brit has her faults, yes but then again she's WAY more sane then myself, so who's talking? If you're checking the reviews to see if it look's good, READ IT. You won't regret it... unless ye have no taste that is :/

Side note, Welcome Back Noa, I missed this fic, and yer writing... Some of the best writing i've seen, and i DON'T just mean SI's!

Wow...plot-deviation! I'm ridiculously worried at the moment! In Britney's place I'd be hyperventilating and panicking like crazy. Even with the plot off, you still know and understand things that no one else could possibly know, and you know your enemies capabilities almost better than they do, but still. If things are changing, then that means that things might not end up the way they're suppose to, I'd never be able to handle that. Good thing Brittney's out there instead.

Aaah Tiger Festival! If I remember any lines from Tales of Graces, that's the one! I absolutely love your writing style, and how realistic your characters (OC or not) are! I've never really left any comments on this story before-mostly because I read this entire thing in one sitting months ago and I needed to sleep-but this was definitely the one to comment on. Deviating from the game script... Wooo, sounds like an adventure in itself. I hope your week is going well enough, and I can't wait for your next chapter, whenever that may be!

LS

This was a very enjoyable chapter to read. Wonderful interactions with both Lloyd and Zelos. "Tiger Festival" fits Lloyd so well, but there was serious matters to balance out the humorous tone. Same with the chat with Zelos. Can I say that imagining him and Brit relaxing and drinking mimosas while talking about serious matters is an image that suits their particular relationship real well? Of course Zelos would take advantage of Brit's knowledge to shirk off and enjoy a bit of luxury! But of course he'd also give her real advice about how she should trust Lloyd.

And now to sit back and look forward to how everything will change because of the little little things.

One day there must be an Earth story time chapter! :0

Silly Brit, you already know what its made of in another plane. . . XP

I checked out that NR manga the moment I saw your mention of it, and it's great! How often is it updated? I'll also take a look at that other self insert you liked.

Interesting plot derailment, I can only guess how it'll change things beyond the early Temple of Darkness. Nice training session between Brit and Lloyd, it's cool how they continue to grow stronger. I'm already looking forward to Brit's involvement in that 'Darkness Beam' skit.

Keep up the great work!

I love how you added that Tiger Festival bit. I'm sooooooo happy that you finally updated! I wanted to tweet you to ask when you will be updating, but I was too shy to do it. Please update soon!

And "tiger festival"?
I was like RICHARD!
God I need to go and finish TOGf!

OMG! Niiiiice loved how u changed the plot, it came naturally not forced, also liked how small things led to it.
Can't wait for Brit to confront Lloyd. And how u will do the plot from here!

OMG! OMG! OMG!
I didn't read it yet, but OMG!
Yatta finally! Happy u updated though ur busy! YES!

Hoo man... I had the anxiety clutching my gut. Prepare to save Kate, Britney! And the horrors of the Temple of Darkness!

Update whenever you can.

I got excited when I saw that you updated, considering how long it's been since last time. Two things stand out to me.

First off, "Tiger Festival?" *snort* Bwahaha. I can totally see Asbel and Lloyd getting along well.

Secondly, good job on a masterful plot derailment. I think I speak for all of us fans of your work when I say that I'll have no idea what's going to happen next (which, obviously, will make your story more exciting). Of course, things for you will get harder, having to come up with events that will logically follow this new path with liitle to base them off of. But hey, if anyone can pull that off, it's you.

Overall, very well done update. Looking forward to your next installment! :)

Hey, I'm really sorry that I haven't reviewed your storry yet. I've really been enjoying it and its probably one of the best self-inserts that I've read.

I like Brit; her character is in depth and she seems real (which I suppose she is, since this is a self-insert). You've kept her from becoming a mary-sue and her reactions are very realistic. I like that you've made the Symphonia world(s) real, instead of just making the character get sucked into a game. The way that Brit made it into Sylverant is also very unique.

The game characters also seem a little more real, like they have more dimensions to them. Lloyd isn't just an idiot as I've seen him be porteayed in many fanfictions. I like this as I believe that the only reason he was so stubid in the game was so that things could be explained to the player without seeming wierd. At the same time you've kept his characterization similar to that of the game.

I like that all of the characters are involved in the story the same amount and that Brit has a special relationship with all of them. I must admit that I like her friendship with Lloyd and her connection with Kratos the most.

I'm glad that your not making for a complete rewrite of the game and are changing somethings around. It makes for a much more intersting story that way.

I like that Brit is going throuh thea moral dilema with all of the choices that ahe makes. It makes the story more realistic and gives the character more depth. It also allows fro the readers to connect more with the character as we can understand the struggle that she's going through; knowing the future will turn out well, but wanting to stop catastrophes which may change the future for the worst. I hope that eventually Brit will be able to tell Lloyd the whole truth and he'll be able to help her some with her fears and guilt (assuming he stays her friend, which I'm hoping he will).

I really love your story and am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

With regards,
Yua-hime