 Liave Ekeli 5/16/09 . chapter 1This was really good. I was watching TDK again with a friend a couple of nights ago, and when that scene came up we both talked about how cool we thought this guy was. I liked that you gave him a background, in addition to the backbone, or morals we already know he possesses. I liked the way you had him remark that he was built for intimidation, and that he was never one to use a lot of words. The description goes perfectly with the character as I saw him in the movie. |