 simply -v 12/5/07 . chapter 2smiles all round keke
aw man the eva rangers unite bit XD
so innocent! XD |
 simply -v 12/5/07 . chapter 1keke very original, cute idea nad plot! XD
loved it! |
 Kemious 11/9/05 . chapter 2This was hella hilarious I mean I was laughing from begining till the end. Ah man it was so cute |
 Sorix 3/25/05 . chapter 1Hey.
Well, I'll be honest. This review has nothing to do with this fic. Sorry. But since they wiped all those fics a long time ago in a galaxy far far away, (ever since So Happy Together was taken off), I have no way of getting a message to you about that fic. And thats fine. Privacy is so necessary.
I need you to finish that fic. NEED. I have printed it and read it countless times because it is the best fic ever. Ever. So please post whatever you have and call it "Chapter 37" cause I will die if you don't. DIE.
Please.
I am on my knees.
...Please...
-Sorix |
 Knight's Shadow 7/9/04 . chapter 3 Very well done.Good grammer and dialog as well. |
 King Alar 2/8/04 . chapter 1This is more like it. After wasting so much time on "So Happy Together," you wrote something GOOD. You could use prereaders for grammar, though. Other then that, abandon SHT and just don't write Asuka into your stories, if you hate the character that much. |
 R3Dragon 8/26/03 . chapter 3I already starting to love this story!
Miss Kimberly... For your story so happy together, 11-38 the link isn't working... Can you please correct this... I'm dying to find out what will happen to Shinji and Rei! |
 ChiBi HenTAi AnGeL 4/18/03 . chapter 3YO! KAWAII!
You're not going to stop these are you?
NO! WE WANT MORE! |
 Yanng 10/9/02 . chapter 3THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST EVA. FANFICTION EVER.
i love your work please keep it up |
 someguy 10/7/02 . chapter 1 WTF! It's cute, but it's not Evangelion. Evangelion is a show about _DARKNESS_! |
 John Damen 10/7/02 . chapter 3There something I have to get off my chest before I can give my review.
KawaiiChare, I am pleased you were trying to be nice about your flame, but I must tell you, as politely as I can...to go blow your self. I have been flamed to much to feel they are good and have vowed I will NEVER flame anyone no matter how bad their writing is. If its that bad, I don't review it. Simple and it works. So, in closing I must say, go take a flying fuck through a rolling doughnut. :) Langerhast, I would tell you to go fuck yourself, but I'm afraid you would reproduce.
Kim, I think this fic was very funny. I think it was very good. I think you are one of the better fanfic writers there is. In this fic, you did a superb job in telling the difernce in kids teens and adults. The coodie thing really brought me back to 2nd grade. The bit with the Ikaris tapeing damn near everything Shinji did is so like parents. The "Boys/Girls are better than Girls/Boy", I remember that. I also remember convencing my friends to hurt them selfs on the swings by yelling "Go higher! Jump!" when the swings were on a concreat playground. I never did that myself, I ain't that dumb. My dad used to convence his friend to jump off a two storie barn when he was my age. I bet you don't belive me, but its true. Just goes to show how smart they were back then, huh? But I have a question. Why the hell are you writing FANFICS? Your good enough to write a fucking BOOK! If you did I know I would see that in Barns & Noble. If not a real book, why dont you try your hand at writing an original fic? Just speaking my mind, as so many flamers seem to enjoy doing. Thanks for the time.
'Till Next Time,
John Damen |
 betacygni 9/15/02 . chapter 3 i cant get over how funny this story is!
it brings me back to my childhood days
hehehe |
 KawaiiChare 8/11/02 . chapter 1 *cough* Um... Let's see...
If Misato's father is still here by the time she's 15 (the 2nd Impact was when she was 14), then I'm guessing the 2nd Impact never occurred. Then why is there a Tokyo-3? Just wondering.
If Misato's 15, then that means that Shinji is at the age of 1, and yet you portray him as 5? Even if the setting is different, you still have to stay true to the timeline, in my opinion.
Now, about flames...
Flames are a good thing. It shows that you're not perfect and that you need to improve. They're harsh, but they're good. Hell, I've been flamed lots, too, but it's made me more consciensious of my work. Except for the real eejits that flame without even READING the fic (I have one person in mind, but it's not the FY, trust me), I think that flames are quite healthy. Sorry if you don't like my opinion, but it's called Freedom of Speech.
Have a nice day! :) |
 anon 7/28/02 . chapter 3 That was really good, I was laughing like crazy. The way you characterized the kids was so cute. Props on a great fic |
 Xiaou Nem 5/5/02 . chapter 3WONDERFUL!
I'm laughing so much my brother thinks I'm insane (Ok, he thought so before to, but now he's really *scared* _)! |