Amazing story, so cute! I can't wait to read the sequel! Wondeful writing job! ^.^

baka-san likes!! can't wait till the next one

this was soo good! funny, had all of my favorite pairings, what could be better? can't wait for the sequel!!

"Things quickly degraded further the moment she left"
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Are you making a reference to Crisis Core?

sorry, i'm a slow person, but that was funny! Can't wait till the next chapter!!

Five fangirl squeals in this chapter. Five. And while rereading it to write this, you'll probably get a few more.

Kay. So Zexy and Demy. Absolutely perfect. I'm willing to bet that Zexion will start liking water-based scents now. :D ...yeah, six fangirl squeals.

Axel + Roxas + closet always equals win. Riku locking them in the closet and then turning on Sexy Back equals epic win and fangirl squeal number Saix. I mean seven.

Sephiroth's plan to get Yuffie into girl clothes was hilarious. And then Kairi realizes Yuffie is a girl. Cue fangirl squeal number eight. And then the following conversation. Cue squeal number nine.

Mall Duty 2? I love it already. And I know nothing about it except the name. ...fangirl squeal of joy number ten! Wow, ten fangirl squeals in one chapter. I think that's a record, actually. Yay!

-Kiki

Oh my gawd. ~Squeal~ That was so awesome! With the Akuroku and the Zemyx and the- ~Nosebleed~ A little sad that it wasn't longer and it didn't have much Sora in it, but I loved how Riku reacted to everything. It was perfect! Keeping an eye out for the sequel! Hey, sequal, Squall... Connection?

aww yeah, just what i need to enlighten my week! a yaoi fanfic =3=

oksy this officaly one of my all time foavrite Kingdom Hearts Fics! I love it!

Ahahaha this was great! I loved the way you got the different pairs together! I am totally looking forward to the sequel! ^_^

well, you knew that i would have to read it and favorite it eventually. I told you i would. i loved it so so much and was sad when i had no more to read

...Lucy. xD Oh, man! That's the best thing I've heard all day! Yes, Marly's new nickname is Lucy.

I personally liked Sephiroth's (extra evil I'm-planning-something) smirk (of DOOM!), Zexy speaking and Demyx fainting, Squall's squeak of alarm... and all of Squall's lines in that section. Oh, and Roxas nonchalantly folding shirts after stomping on Riku's foot.

So, basically everything. And last chapter... my favorite parts were Zexion becoming speechless, Cloud tackling Reno, Yuffie and Kairi's interaction, Kairi's line about Seph and Genesis, and... the entire thing. I liked too much of it to mention, I'd probably have to paste the entire chapter in here to show you everything. So I'll stop.

-Kiki

Poor Squall, getting molested by Cloud! Does he have a new love interest every week? And Zack has nobody ;_;! Still lovin' the story. Four chapters seems a little short. But that's okay XD Bye >:3

Aw, I can just imagine Demyx all flustered in a moogle hat! They DO say kupo alot in FF9 XD Tchyeah, awesome story. ZEMYX FTW!

Nice chapter, teehee my favorite quote is “That cherry blossom stuff smells like shit,” Selphie cheerfully snapped back at him.
OMG I couldn't stop laughing! TOO funny!

Ahahaha yenta time! Gotta love the friends/coworkers playing matchmaker! XD And Pervy!Cloud is hilarious imo. Demyx is adorable of course... he WOULD babble and then promptly FAINT when invited to sit with Zexy. XD