Nice! I love it! You are a good poet. Write more poems because I like poems. Then read mine too. They aren't as good as yours, but yeah. I LIKE THIS POEM.
poemsaregood 12/14/01 . chapter 1
Parody Lover 12/4/01 . chapter 1
Hmm, though I don't know what GWing or Trowa is that was still nice use of rhyming.