What a fantastic story. I love Alice and Jasper, so it was nice to get a peek into their pasts.

There were so many great parts. I fell really badly that James ended up killing "Angel"...why! *cries* But, I guess it's a good thing that he wasn't around or who knows how the story would have played out. You did make me more curious about him though, what is Angel's story, I wonder.

Jasper, what a romantic he is with the Thanksgiving gifts.

Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

That was a really great story! 33 The Epilogues was ah-mazing.. Perfect!

tIs good I wish u had the private message up so I could send u some fanfiction of tie me down to this world I've got some ideas from every time I've read it kyrandiana. Ps maybe if your stuck u could write in the last chapter of that story boths povs or even Emmett thoughts about them he he he

This is only my second review ever on fanfic (the 1st was chap 13 of this story!). I loved, loved, loved this chapter. Your exploration of different kinds of embraces was lovely-I'm going to spend a lot of time thinking about this.

You write Jasper and Alice beautifully. You capture them in a way that is true to how Stephenie wrote them and how I pictured them but also adds brilliance and layers. I look forward to more from you.

Wonderful story and so well written. Thank you so much.

Good. Prefect. This is the back story of Alice and Jasper. It was touching, funny and in some part so honest it was painful. You did a wonderful job. I am so glad I found you under someone else's favorite list. I can't wait to read some more of your stories. Keep up the good work.

I've loved this stoty so much, and I'm really sorry that I haven't left a review on other chapters -I might go back someday and leave a review on each chapter explaining to you each little thing that's made me fall a bit more inlove with this story- but I've been sprinting through this story.

It's really beautiful and I love how you manage to keep Jasper's accent in his chapters, so little stories do that. I love how you show us how truly reliant these two characters are on each other. I love their brokeness and how you have shown it. I love the way that you start at their respective beginnings.

I could probably go on forever about how much I love this story, but that would mean that reading a stupidly long review would take away from the time which you could be using for writing :D.

I was going to wait until i finished this story, but I just had to review now. I positivily *love* the image you conjure in this chappie with "He glides over the earth as a bird flies through air—fluidly and without effort. He even appears to have feathers—dozens of little crescent-shaped ones that line his skin wherever it is exposed." Not only is it something I've not seen made before *claps* but it is quite lovely.

keep it up

great chapter. your love of the story , and the details, really shows how passionate you get when you write, cheers!

I almost cried at the end (it's really hard to make me do so :P)

Gosh... this is one of my favorite Alice/Jasper sotry !

(My eyes are glowing)

Though I may have been a bit late in reading your story (about a year late, apparently), I still want to tell you that I thought it was beautiful. It certainly gave me a lot to think about. Thank you!

aw! that was really well done. i loved reading this one, it was great!

This is wonderfully written, and I enjoy reading it. THis is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read concerning the backstory of Alice and Jasper.

Very nice.