I'll review even though you haven't updated in about five months. The start of the story was really good with you capturing the characters perfectly. Through their dialogue and actions you showed their personalities well. The rest of the charicters were good too and all the lies that you have built up show that everything could come apart soon. The last couple chapters I didn't like as much, partly because you seemed to throw so many characters at once. I'm not a big fan of romance and it looks like you're starting to take it in that direction with Cody and Lauren and she seems a bit too perfect. Even so, this is a really good story that I hope you continue.

Ok, good story, they tricked their Mom pretty easily so far. Why does Zack have such a problem with Lauren. Is he jealous of her and Cody? Would he have liked her if he had met her first? Oh well, it's nice her and Cody get along so well.

Good chapter, I like Lauren and her friends. I think (and I hope I'm wrong for Cody's sake) that Zack and Lauren fight to much to not like each other. All that friction, they must really like each other. Cody would be very unhappy if Zack steals his girl, like he always does.

Still liking the story, I like the new people, Lauren and her bro. Wondering what they are training for, hm.

Nice, will they tell her what happened? Will Zack try to take her away from Cody anyway, after his foot feels better. Good chapter, more please.

Nice... Zack being 'Gimpy'... XD

So they've actually run away now?

I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

So now the trouble really starts. This is a good story. Hopefully Kurt and Carrie will finally wake up, and realize that the twins are telling the truth. Maybe those other boys will come back while the twins are gone. Hopefully they won't get into too much really bad trouble.

This is great, are they running from Kurt's, or are they going to meet up somewhere later.

Good story, are they going to find those boys? I guess that the twins aren't since they are supposed to runaway. Maybe Maddie and London will. Can't wait for more.

Yay! They're meeting up again! I dont feel bad for Carey at all. Thankies for updating!

cool! it's getting good! keep going!

Dude, this is amazing. I cannot wait for the next chapter! :)