This story is just plain sexy while not crossing the border into porn or other less savory arenas. I think you wrote one of the best "erotic" stories I've read and you kept it tasteful throughout. Exceptional writing.

Aw so cute I totally love it :D Elliot and Olivia fit perfectly together and are such a cute couple. I can imagine that this must have been a wonderful birthday for El :D :D :D

Great story, good idea and very good written! Hope you write soon more stories like this :)

Have a great weekend *hugs*

You do that sweet sexy sassy so well it's almost scary. I loved this your right it flows so well and easy.

Elliot thinks he's so slick...but then again he is. That was nice for noth of them. Liv is such the hopeful harlot...buying a teddy set in hopes that the nite would end up back at her place. how shameful...god i wanna be her when i grow up...hehehehe!

So I want to see how he's guna spend a milstone bday if this was a regular one. Hm...Liv, pasties, and cake...it has possiblies no?

XO-Sammi

Good job! That would make a very good birthday for Elliot. Lol.

This was HOT! VERY hot! LOVED the indecent exposure lines! This seems like something that would actually happen!

Oh, damn. Very hot. Very, very hot. I totally wish there was smut with this (it would be perfect! And that's rare for me to think). Perhaps a second chapter? :D

That was great! definitely one of my favorite e/o stories. You're a very good writer, congrats!

so cute

This was HOT! great work :)

this was excellent...totally hot lol

well i wanted to hear what happen after...more details please :)...

Nettie, Nettie, Nettie, I LOVE THIS! So very very much I tell you. Love it to pieces. Excellent job as always my dear.

xoxo

Sar

That was so sweet, I swear to God I got cavities! Totally chiche thing to say, I know, but it's true. That was an amazing story! Do you ever write anything thats not amazing? I doubt it! Lol, but yes, This was really very good and so sweet(: Great job

This was awesome! Brilliant. Romance, humor and E/O action...what could be better. Great work.

I loved the indecent exposure lines. Funny. :D

soo cute! i absolutely loved this! very well written!

i absolutely loved this you should write one of livs birthday like before this one took place