this story seems really promising. please continue with it. i'd love to read it through till the end. i really like it.

It's pretty good but i think you might just have to read over it again and make sure it all makes sense. I had a little bit of trouble understanding the first part. But other than that it's an ok story. Please right another chapter for it.

For mega cute ZoroxSanji fun go to youtube

watch ?v xnYxHNBILbI (just get rid of the spaces)

The name of the video is:

Opening ZoroxSanji High School Student Edition

By RoronoaYuria Posted on: December 12, 2008

Oh my, oh my... I get to be the first? Cool! hehe

Wow! I just love this story and I can't wait to read some more of it, so please don't stop writing on it... I'm a one-piece-oholic, that's why... and now I'm a one-piece-of-two-oholic o so please keep on writing, kay?

Love your writing, it's really dragging my attention(I think that you alreaddy know that)

Update soon and take care!

Pernille T. Boldemann