This sent chills up my spine and everything.
Absolutely fantastic.

I love your style.
I'm going to go read it again.

I've read this story so many times and it still chills me. I love wackjobmurderer!Roxas. Poor Sora, left alone with said wackjob. I can't help but laugh, though (call me crazy) at the butterknife. Byebye Riku! XD Amazing job! I adore this so much!

It was quite... interesting. Yay! I was able to interpret it though! I seem to like your writings like this. Keep it up! ;)

wow. i love this O_o

Okay, yeah, was slightly hard to understand, but it was understood. That was so pro. Makes me seem a little less insane. but, that was ... Wow. So, Roxas killed Axel because Axel had a kid With namine whom he then proceeded to kill? And teh kid was Sora and the silver-haired dude was Riku, of course. but... Wow. Just wow. I really loved this. Instant fav, for sure!

This was really awesome! :D Oh, Roxas, you nut...you can't kill someone with a butter knife! Gosh, you are a disgrace to all psychos.

wow. this was so good. the hidden imagery was amazing. i love it!

Wow.
Hand me the cookies on a golden platter.
Amazing, as always.

DODE~! this was so freakin cool~ and so very insane~ poor Axel~ but i like how crazy Rox is =w=

Woah. Freaky.

Holy shite, man. Roxas killed Axel, who killed Namine?! I sense some kind of scandal in the background. INCEST. Terrible, terrible scandal. Poor baby Sora.

Trippy fic. All crazy like. I liked it.

W-wow.

Usually, I'm not a big fan of these types of stories, but this one was just really... well, I could follow the train of thought!
It's terrible and psychotic and horrifying, and beautiful and vivid and everything at once.

It looks quite fun to have written, and it was quite fun to read.

Okay. Roxas went bat-shit crazy. That's not so good. I mean, what if he, like, staples his hands together? HOW THE FUCK IS HE SUPPOSED TO KILL RIKU THEN, HUH? O_O

Yeah, just finished school, gone a bit nutty myself. You killed Naminé and Axel and Sora's like, a little bubba. D'aw, how cute! *o*

Is Demyx his brother? Or is he just at his house? Is Demyx in this at all? (I wouldn't trust me to get anything right...)

He killed Axel... because he said something about Sora? How the hell was /he/ conceived? No, no, don't answer that.

Erm, is there incest here? Or is that, like, a complete shot in the dark?

OMG. Did Roxas and Naminé... Did Naminé and Roxas... Sora... Oh ehm gee! Am I right?

Your reply: Hell no! ...Weirdo.

Er, right, anyways. Because, yeah, I'm not having an imaginary conversation with you. No siree. O_e

Yeah, Roxas is so delightfully mental. It certainly gives a certain edge to the fic. And I can totally see how this narrative is similar to Sheep On Death Row.

Wait... wait...

Instead of just deleting everything I said, above, I'll just kinda let you go along with my train of thought.

I GEDDIT! AHA! I RULE TEH COOKIE JAR!

Axel killed Naminé, who was Roxas' sister BUT also Sora's mother. Roxas, Naminé's brother and Sora's father killed Axel in return. So little incestuous Roxy was having two relationships...

Oh, I get it now.

Duh, I ishn't stoopid or nuffink lyk datt. :B /stupidity and illiteracy

What I really want to know is, who did Roxas really love? Was he in love with Axel but falling in love with Nami, as he talks about him falling in love with the vague 'her' or did he love them both...

And I'm still not completely sure as to what Riku had to do with it... Hm.

Can I get half a cookie? /hopeful

Tasha

The wording's so twisted and erratic, but I couldn't stop reading it. I think the style was what definitely made this, and even though it took awhile to click I think I reallykindoflikeit.

And, yeah.