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TexasDreamer01
2009-03-13 . chapter 8
*chuckles* these are funny, in an ironic sort of way.

not too much on the butler ones though... >.
Wolfember842
2009-03-09 . chapter 8
yay! fluff!
The One Called Demetra
2009-03-05 . chapter 5
8D Last line was awesome enough to get faved. I'm still giggling. How uncharacteristic of me.
The One Called Demetra
2009-03-05 . chapter 3
Onesided H/T=Win
The One Called Demetra
2009-03-05 . chapter 2
Yay, that was awesome. Great format, although I wouldn't have included the last bit. Maybe make it a bit longer with more little implications rather than a bombshell of sorts at the end.
The One Called Demetra
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Very cute. I'm not a fan of A/H in the all-encompassing sense at all...I just like it in that implied way. But still, very cute.
cc19
2009-03-04 . chapter 8
These are perfect. I feel like I'm reading little inserts in the books because the characters are portrayed so well. Stunning. Please, update soon!
Holly Marie Fowl
2009-03-04 . chapter 8
Oh! That's clever! I love it! :D:D:D:D:D
nekodreamstealer
2009-03-04 . chapter 8
CUTE! xD
Selene Appia
2009-03-04 . chapter 8
Very nice, overall. (Even if you have pretty strange ships in there: H/B, H/F, H/J, anyone? lol).

Besides, none of the characters are very OOC, if at all, and that's not exactly easy to achieve.
Emerald Magic
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
i like the idea. all of these stories are great! d
Lli
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
Hey!! These are all super cute. Loved the 'anniversary' line in the Vinyaya one (yes, I DO wonder what her name is). One nitpick: I think Artemis' speech is a bit too archaic, even for him, in the first one. But other than that, great job! And thank you for such excellent grammar... it's so beautiful!!:P
Liris
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
Whoop, I like the bigber project already if it's gonna be written like this. It's really good, and the two POV thing works really well. Update soon, or post the 'big project', but one or the other, pls? I love this story, it's really good, and sweet. H/A rocks, and so do you!
ilex-ferox
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
A nice one-shot, and I loved the concept, but the second section seemed to weaken the effect. Perhaps this is because, although you captured her character very well with the style, it had less impact on the reader than the style you used for Artemis where the clipped precision was such a nice contrast to the feeling behind it.
Super Reader
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
I don't think it's bad. It's really sweet actually. And would make sense...especially now that Arty's seen the light. As in, he's now aware that Holly is more than a friend. ;) I also liked the input from Juliet. She's a great character.
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