Now this was a nice chapter in the story so far but where is the ending?

This is an awesome story.

CONFUSED! Very, Very, Very CONFUSED! I have a headache!

Cell phones actually came around in the 1980s. They were literally huge and expensive back then, though.

Is Xiff pronounced like Ziff?

Well nice to see the rescue has worn off but now there's another problem. what happens when the shrink ray wears off and how are the girls supposed to get home? Please tell me you'll have those questions answered soon. oh and one more thing. I really liked the story so far.

So far i've read 21 chapters of this and yet i still feel like the end is not close in hand yet. You're positive that a plot twist is comming soon?

Come on this is still interesting but when are we going to see the ending to all of this?

Nice plot twist where you actually almost have the Heroes about to win but fumble at the last minute. So how long is this story going to be anyway?

Doing great!!

Is Vincent McFly Sr married to Mike Hartford's mom in the Father universe?

Well this just keeps getting better and better.

Well the Chapters are flowing better somewhat but there is still poitential.

Is Susan Doc's granddaughter?

This is getting a little bit how do i say repitivite with the whole cliff catches girl from other universe and steals her. however, things are getting better in your story but still where's the big fight? the winner take all?