i think she should love him not hate him, the past is the past and it is now the present she should forget abt her dead hamster or at least stop being mad abt it

My gawd, how old are you? If this is a journal, please at least make them a decent length long. Despite that, I like your writing style, and I really think you should redo this because this FanFiction can be good! :')

of course she hates you it's not even a page long -.-;

haha love how he's mooning away, to bad it's not longer.

This is by far the shortest fanfic I've ever read, yet it has more reviews any of mine put together! You know, I think that this has something to do with the world in general, or some deep, underlining meaning to it. Otherwise, all this means that this is just too bloody unfair and freakin' stupid!

You seem to have great writing style, it would be good if you could continue it...I would so love it if you can continue the fanfic. xD

The other one on here was by you too called 'I hate him' in anya's pov right? It would be good to like write 2 stories one in her pov the other in his? I dunno this is my mind just wandering lol ;)

If you're going to post something on here at least make it a bit longer! You're writing is quite good but seriously add more to this.

i see potential with this fic! please keep writing!

PLEASE WRITE MORE! a sequel or something! ITS GOOD!

my God! write more! I like very, very much Gothic Sports, please, make a continue story or something, pleas! _ God blesses you, bye

Oh, please! Please keep on writing. I love Gothic Sports so much! Please write!