 Nimbus Llewelyn 2009-11-12 . chapter 3 Please, please update this! I like the idea of deep fried troodontids. |
 Dragonrider2203 2009-05-17 . chapter 3I love the idea of Lester having a daughter! And you've made her into a brilliant character! It would be brilliant if you could write more! |
 Nimbus Llewellyn 2009-01-25 . chapter 3 Please update this, I am literally dying of anticipation! On my previous review she would run round him twice on sundays, Lyle was probably swaying when he gave his report :). Oh yes and, Choice cutlets of troodontid only 99p at Asda.:) |
 kate.is.doing.performing.arts. 2009-01-10 . chapter 3nice stuff keep it up yeah good luckz.kate xx |
 Nimbus Llewellyn 2009-01-10 . chapter 3 Run Troodontids! Run before you get turned into prehistoric kebabs! Phew, Liz is good at dealing with her father. She would run rings round him any day of the week! |
 Nimbus Llewellyn 2009-01-09 . chapter 2 Speedy reactions. As for what lyle was doing in the pub... well what else? Getting a pint ( or ten... :) ) |
 kate.is.doing.performing.arts. 2009-01-08 . chapter 2o i likes this story i wid luvs to know what happens udate soon yeah?kate xx |
 Pandora of Ithilien 2009-01-07 . chapter 2nice save, liz... love the jenny/liz and liz/connor interaction. though lester may kill jenny for getting his daughter involved again. |
 Pandora of Ithilien 2009-01-06 . chapter 1oh dear... and i agree, jenny's ability to move quickly in spike heels is impressive. |