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Thorn In Your Side
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
Ah, cute. A bit too short, a bit too...unfinished, but very subtly Galinda/Elphaba. I love it!

But, may I say? At the time of Doctor Dillamond's death, Boq was on friendly terms with them, yes? He was calling Elphaba Elphie. The dialogue came off as a bit too formal for the setting, but Galinda's emotions were portrayed well.

Keep writing~

~Thorn
Defying Gravity 728
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
That last line reminded me of "I'll Cover You", heheh.

Anyway, I loved this! Awesome job. :D
AMurderOfOne
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
I loved this. :]
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