 Thorn In Your Side 2009-01-15 . chapter 1Ah, cute. A bit too short, a bit too...unfinished, but very subtly Galinda/Elphaba. I love it!
But, may I say? At the time of Doctor Dillamond's death, Boq was on friendly terms with them, yes? He was calling Elphaba Elphie. The dialogue came off as a bit too formal for the setting, but Galinda's emotions were portrayed well.
Keep writing~
~Thorn |