IT"S SO GOOD! WRITE MORE!

Bravo! I LOVED this story! You stayed true to Michael - exactly as I thought he's be, and crafted a beautiful piece. Five stars.

I like this. It's simple, not overly emotional (just enough), and good. Nice work!

omg! i loved it. can you write the part when they first see each other in PD 10 from michael's pov? that would be great.

awesome

o.m.g. amazing. no offense to everyone else's PD fanfics, but they suck. yours is AWESOME!!

pretty good.

Loved it. I absolutely ADORE Michael.

What do I think?

I think you should do some more like this. From their other meetings during book 10.

It was very, very, very well done!

More please!

ah

so cute!
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I do love Michael!
He's the sweetest guy ever!

good work!

wow thats good! sometimes people make Michael soo mushy in fanfics! u kept his personality!

Aw, I loved it! It's interesting to imagine Michael's POV. Haha, you should totally do the scene with him at Mia's birthday with the whole JP thing. ;]

Great job! Keep writing.

Lovely! I absolutely adore fics in Michael's point of view! (Which is why I wrote one of my own before "Forever Princess" came out.)

Just one little correction: You wrote "For in teh within the next minute..." when it should be either "For within the next minute..." or "Within the next minute..."

Other than that, I absolutely love it!

Wonderful job!

~*Eli

k , that was AMAZING,
and i really do think you should write more on micheals pov?
it turn out awesome.
hope you consider that.

that was good.
i didn't get it, but it was good.
there.
you happy?