another amazing chapter. keep up the good work and i cant wait till the next chapter. I am so hooked. :)

what does it mean? tel me

SURPRISE Yay nother chapter!

No duh surprise! :)

HOLY SMOKES!

good chapter, I wonder who the Rebel Leader is...and i wonder if Dalmaria ended up really setting them up or she was really sincere at the end, can't wait for next update

Akona better watch where he is putting his hands, Big Ole Gil is gonna get him. Sara has alot of connections in this land of yours,are all of them good, or bad or goodbad.(what ever they are?)

wow, that was a great chapter this new queen sounds interesting, i'm very interested to see how it will play out, by the by, i miss the goddesses

yay an update! And a good one at that...hurry and tell more.. :)

I spy with my little eye... another good chapter.

I liked this chapter it was interesting and suspensful. I hope Sara can finally let people take some of the chip of her shoulder, She can't do everything... even if she's the chosen one. Great job ladies :)

Hopefully Sara learns to start trusting the group :)

I swear my sisters have done that mind thing to me before, and made me look after their kids without having to pay me for it. Yay 'nother chapter

you should defiantly keep writing and put part 3 up here. i love this story. i would read every part of this story.

Yay New chapter... Hehehe, non walking dead person.