Awwee... that was so sad... this would make my friend bawl her eyes out (she is a huge Okita Souji fan). Good job describing the details :)

that was sad, still very good ^^

I will not point out errors and only say that death scenes are the most fun because they are dramatic. I like them that way. ;D
Okita and Hijikata are love, and Okita is the only death from TB that was sad.