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JCS1966
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
Ah, yes, there is indeed justice in the universe. Face, it ladies...you're SO screwed.

Loved "Soccer Moms"and now this worthy sequel. Well done!
RonHeartbreaker
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Yes, funny. Poor Shego and Kim. They're doomed.
Aero Tendo
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
That was so funny! :)
I enjoyed the whole thing and Dr. Director along with Hobble (wouldn't he have been promoted or something by then?)

I have to agree with one reviewer though, a monkey could make the law agency look bad. :)

Keep up the good work!
RedBlueGreen
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
Loved it. "Soccer Moms" is one of my favourite fics here. Perhaps this is a harsh but fitting punishment for Shego, but surely a little petty over Kim's shaming of the Law? Still, the combined product of Kim, Shego, Ron, Drakken, and the Tweebs...it doesn't bear thinking about.

Typo nits to pick:
next to her wsa Shego
explination
You’re child

...and a couple of others. Anyway, it's great, well done!

More! More!
Sentinel103
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
yes pay back is so sweet. As Kim's mother probably said, "I hope you have 5 just like you."


Larry (Sentinel 103)
XoXoGigglieGirl1
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
great story
i luv kim nd shego
keth1
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
I want more of this story line.
Mr. Wizard
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
Two stories in such a short time, the cosmos has been most kind. As hilarious as it is chilling, especially for any parent.
captainkodak1
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
LOL,That is so funny. Good to see you back!
CajunBear73
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
Oh man, that's harsh! The best and the worst of both sides of both families, joined together, and now its up to the moms to step up and put aside their personal rivalries.

Interesting times indeed! For those two former adversaries. With their children... LOL!

Who'd have thunk it that all those agencies and institutions had it out for Kim and Shego.

Glad to see ya up again! Got more new or additions to existing coming?

CB73
spectre666
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
Ah yes, the universe has justice. And poetic irony, and years of fun and laughter ahead for Dr. Director and Officer Hobble. Paybick is not only a **, it's fun! Great follow up. Hope you can get something "Senior" done, as well. (hint, hint), Thanks for the laugh,
Spectre
bigherb81
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
Nice one sort of like a parents favorite quote "Wait till you have kids" type deal. I can understand the whole thing with Shego and yes Kim did go a little over board with the hero thing. But seriously a monkey with a gun can make most law enforcement agencies look bad. And your pretty much bringing it on your self when you call in a highschool student to handle your dirty work in the first place. That's just her universe I guess. Great job on this story really funny stuff.
Cylon One
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
It was so much fun to read.
Reactions from Kim and Shego were priceless at the end.
screaming phoenix
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
And who says that justice is blind? That was the most interesting and fitting punishments that the authorities could have dished out for those two. Oh the humanity of it all I hope Kim and Shego stock plenty of depends from now on, they’re going to need them. Oh and hair dye, lots of hair dye. I suspect that we will see some serious grey hairs among these two before long.

I hope the kids date, wouldn’t that be fun?
Katsumara
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
Haha. I love their reactions at the end so much. I can so picture Kim saying that.
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