Hey, um this is pretty interesting so far =)
I even have a few theories in my head.
I think this is distant future and that is obviusly Shego, and those are the descendants of Kim and Ron that i think look exactly the same as them wich would trow of balance Shego of course XD and she was in a cryogenic thank cause they couldn't control her sou they put her to sleep in a huge battle if her catsuit is any indication of that n.nU
But that just my main theory i would love to see how this wild go on =)
it really seems pretty interesting so far =D
Hope to see more of this.
Until next time

Oh, definitely continue this story! It's good so far, and it's only the prologue!

I'm hooked--want to see what happens when the green woman wakes up. Definitely want to see what you do with the characters' names since you've been pretty careful to keep the blond man and red head names from the reader.

This one really looke like a good story and I'm asuming its AU...

Post Soon please!

S Cubed,

Hello again. I loved your Kimmie in this chapter. She behaved like any normal woman would to Ron's BS antics and behavior, not at all like the doormat TV Kimmie. I like her.

Shego. How long have you been entombed there? It looks like you were frozen to give your body time to heal from something major/life threatening, but what?

As always, Six, I love the realism and dimensionality of your characters. I'm eager to see what and how my questions may or may not be answered in the chapters to come.

Be Well.

Drakken put Shego on ice? Why? How very peculiar, and what is she to Kim?

Very Cool. So far, you're batting 1.0!

Ohh, very Tomb Raider -I like. Whatever they're searching for must be important and valuable -duh, Capt. Obvious, that's me- perhaps some relic or tech from times past? Or Shego, perhaps?

You say KiGo cryptically?

Very Interesting.

I'm beginning to think everything you touch is pure gold; from all that I've read, I'd say that's true.

And finally, someone who despises the buffoon as much as I do. I've never liked Ron.

Interesting story-- an old-- a very old lair of Drakken's? if so are the main character's the children of Kim and ron-- or someone else?

Got the makings of a good story here. I'm looking forward to chapter 2 to learn more about what this mission is going to be all about.

Bubba