 Bil 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Oh wow, wow, wow. What a fantastically marvellously awesome story! This is absolutely amazing. I love the musings on the Athosians and how they're so good at adapting, I love the baby, I love Rodney and Aidan's cheerful interruption at the end... but most of all I love how you've written John and Elizabeth. They're just so perfectly them and I love the back and forth of the conversation. Honestly, this is just so beautiful; thank you so much for writing it! |