For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

http:// w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

excellent! some typos but good writing style!

Like it? I loved it. Update real soon.

I liked your first chapter especially.

Amzing chapter. Update real soon.

Wonderful chapter. Update real soon.