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Logospilgrim
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
Lovely, my dearest one :-)
wandamarie
2009-12-27 . chapter 30
WOW IT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER THANKS HOPE YOU UP DATE SOON THANKS
Beth5572
2009-12-24 . chapter 30
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.




Thank you,



Terri
darkblade803
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
don't llisten to all those people you are a very good writer and i love snape as a little kid like this it is so cute.
Polish
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
AH!but it clearly explains that he CHOOSE to drink it in the end! gosh! people dont listen! or in this case Read!!
-huggles the little fellow- AHh!! hes soo cute! ^^ you've done a wonderful job on this, dont let what they said get to you! ^^
kurisuchin45556
2009-11-05 . chapter 14
Oh my goodness! That person that sent you that review was so wrong! Plot is what happens in the story, and yours is a good plot because it's original. I've read other stories where severus is turned into a child and had bits and pieces of memory or quickly became an adult again. Those were good, but this is much better. The other stories were so repetitious that I was beginning to grow bored with them. You've added a little spice to the fanfiction world, and I will continue to read not only this story, but your other ones as well!
Pineapple55
2009-10-02 . chapter 4
This story is pretty cool so far but I have to say...Albus and Minerva as a couple is really, really gross. XD
Slytherin Head
2009-09-25 . chapter 28
I loved your story! it had just the right amount of fluffiness. No one is immune to the cuteness of Sev' lol. thank you so much for sharing this piece with us!
surlyjo
2009-09-14 . chapter 29
This was a very decent read: smooth story line, reasonable developement...Pretty fluffy, but a nice happy look at what can sometimes be a dark world.
I don't think you could really tell this had been written by a non-native speaker without the discaimer. Good job.
Looking forward to more in the series, especially if action develops.
jennadancer
2009-09-12 . chapter 28
Very enjoyable! I look forward to reading more.
LizStorm
2009-09-07 . chapter 28
I love this story it is so cute ,sev is adorable! I am so excited to start the sequel, I think it turned out perfectly. to me it all made sense and was really good!
Bittersweet x
2009-09-06 . chapter 29
Great! Going to read it right now!
wandamarie
2009-09-06 . chapter 29
thank you
CYMKK09
2009-09-02 . chapter 28
Your story is so sweet and lovely.

Seeing Severus to be a kid again and he is becoming a person which is out-of-his character are weird.

But you made this story going so well ,that indicates you are an amazing writer.

I am a bit upset that you have to end it,but i have to let you know that i love your story so much.I hoppe you will start a sequel for this story!
Ennairam Atrum Austerus
2009-08-26 . chapter 28
This must have been the most adorable fanfic I have ever read! Severus...or sevvy ^^ is so cute! *cuddles an mental image of sevyy*

Well done!5*

With the most sincere compliments and utter rescpect,

Ennairam
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