This is interesting. I"m curious to know where it goes.

Aww, It's okay Legolas everything will be okay

Sivan tell me, why do people insist on angrying Thranduil? I mean all it's going to give them is death, and yet they follow the plan through, by stealing Legolas. I would generaly be doing the whole 'Imma kill them!' thing but i can't yell at the moment, no voice, and my whole body aches, so i'm kinda useless. i'm sorry Legolas!. I am going to be honest and say that i was completly lost when i opened the chapter, and had to read the first part of chap four again but i got wat story i was reading. i think being sick and having every muscle in my body aching affects my brain. i loved this and i hope more comes soon, i cant wait, seriously i can't, i've got two more weeks of school, aka hell, and i need something to help me survive, which your stories are good at, :)

Hannon
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Garce, Rache, Thranduils.Heart.And.Soul.
Ps. I swear my friends and family think it's funny interupting me when i'm reading a really, really good story, they just do it everytime, and also, I can't wait for more, I think ive already said that! ;)

aw cute little Leggie lol

This is a really good chapter. The angst and suspense are building. Thranduil is getting even more concerned. The disappearance of the guard, the nightmares Legolas has about someone wanting to kill him, involving his Ada's 'secret place', the rumors of the disappearing children, which are very real. The evil men are actually out there, looking for more trouble, of the worst kind. But Thranduil is so sweet, comforting Legolas in every way he can. He is such a wonderful father. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter...so write faster...

This is really getting good. I love your little Legolas and with his father. I love when they snuggle up together with his daily morning blanket visit. It's sweet. I'm guessing that Legolas' nightmare is probably of things to come...foresight? I also think Thranduil could be thinking the same thing, since he knows of the potential threat to Legolas out in Mirkwood, putting two and two together...coincidence? Too much analysis? lol I really like this story, Sivan. Keep it coming!!

ooh. am intrigued. great start, i am looking forward to reading further.

Good chapter. Was Legolas' dream onlya nightmare, or was it what is to come...

It's a great chapter. I loved the moment between Legolas and Thranduil.Update soon plzz

Hey, this was a very good chapter, too. It's obvious now why Thranduil is being so over-protective of his son. He obviously believes the rumors that are going around. It seems he is correct in his assumtions. I love the part when Thranduil tells his son about the good memories he has of his father, spending time outdoors with him, and just being with him.

The cave makes such an interesting touch. Something Thranduil enjoyed with his father and now wants to enjoy with his son. The description is beautiful. I can see some *serious* angst up ahead, now!...Great chapter!

This is a wonderful first chapter to this story. I love the relationship you have here between Thranduill and Legolas.He is very protective of his son, isn't he? There are already hints of things to come. Very good chapter!!