This is a very good story. If Jackie happens to walk in with a four and a half curly hair kid I would so love this story, but if not I would read it anyway. Update

That was such a good chapter - such honest emotion. I admit I am a little impatient to find out what is happening with Jackie but I am really enjoying this crisis of self Hyde is going through. Update soon.

aww! i love kitty! i could totally imagine her saying tht! i cant wait to see wat happens wen he sees jackie again!

Great story! I'm soo hooked and ready to read more!

Kitty's words to Steven were perfect. I can't wait until you update again.

I love the whole dominance battle going on between Red and Steven. It's so amusing.

I'm addicted to your story!

The way you set up your story is great and believable. It could totally happen and that makes me so happy.

Wow. This story really captured my interest.

I love the characters that you have written in this story. I can't wait to see where this leads to. Hopefully you can update more. Great Story please continue.

I adore every piece of this story, and look forward to reading more soon :D

I la-love this story.
fabulous job !

This is great! I love Red & Kitty as Mom and Dad and can't wait to see more.

Hyde is such an ** in this story. I LOVE IT.

update please!!