This storys makin me smile like I'm on the brink of insanity, but in a good way. <..> >.<Is that's even possible? Oh well, I would pray to what ever rules the world and ect. that you would continue this story. It would make a bored little new teen in training less bored and very happy. Think of what wonders you would do to taint my brain with funnys to torment highschool with my freshmen year.

The ketchup thing is pure hilarious geniusness!

I'm really starting to like OC fics ^^U.

I understand how it feels to be proud of a story and no one come to say at least "good fic, please continue" 9.9

Well, anyway, I think you should write longer chapters, and make a better description of the characters, you know, so the readers can understand how the characters feel, and that. 'Cause there are some things that aren't explained enough, and that can make this seems so OOC.

For example, I was wondering at the begining of the first or second chapter, how do Voltaire and Tracey's Mom know each other? I mean, is she a rich woman too? 'Cause if she is not, I don't understand why es he related in anyway to her =/ . And I'm gessig she is not even close to rich class because she is so desperate to get her daughter a rich fiancè <.<

Well, that's enough for today, even with any doubt about the plot, I find your fic very funny :D so please, don't be upset, I know it can be hard some times when people don't pay much attention to our work. Anyway... Have a good weekend =D.

awesome chapters! I like it so far! Keep up the good work

~SD

NO you cant end the story like this! but i'll tell you this, cos this happened to me also. People who read these fics dun really like the original characers with OCs. But ur OC is totally awesome as! please keep writing!
cant wait for next chapter, if there's gonna be a next chapter. plz update!

~SD

review arent every thing
I have some story with like 1 review but I got like 97 traffic story for 2 chapter

so keep writing until you dont like your story anymore

NO! DON'T DO THAT! I WAN TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I have my story and I haven't gotten any reviews. Don't stop a story just because you aren't getting enough reviews, at least you are getting your reviews.

plz dont stop the story! i like it i just didnt review because i dont review often. but plz plz plz dont stop it its turning out good

O.o Poor Tracey. I don't know anyone like her mom. That's just horrible, she's taking advantage of her daughter. When I have writers block I usually listen to music. Which I am doing right now. ^-^

finally! you updated in such a long time wow super fast forward on events anyways hoping you continue this story

pls. update soon

I DONT GET IT?
WATS HAPPENING?

U ROCK
SO MUCH
PLZ WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY

U ROCK