Creepy little story. Keep up the good work.

That was one of the best storys I've ever read. AWSOME!
I absolutly loved it! Ali is an awsome character and i can't wait for the other chapters. well done!

WOW! That was awesome. Just read this thing from start to finish and all I can say is... WOW!! Good job.

O...that's where the last Aliens movie ended...wonder how would it be continued?

Oh I love this suspense with Ali, and Ripley, and I wonder are you going to put the other hive where ripley's queen came from like in the move? Hope you update soon!!

O...now the question lie...where does Ripley's loyalies really lie? She killed the odd white drone at the end of 4th movie and help them escaped. But she looked like she was going willingly with another drone earlier, in an almost erotic way. Will she side with Ali now, or will she side with human? Or is she a queen herself and want to eliminate others?

nice return to form, and i like the alternate origin story of Ali.

Wow, you seriously made Ali a nut case literally lol, though are you going to make the endings different then in the movies? Overall real interesting chapter.

OMG! i'm so sad. Timothy died!

I'm only on the first chapter and i'm hooked!

I'm loving this, keep it coming, else i'll die of suspense.

Nice story, love the cross overs into the Alien films. So are of these going like the movie or will there be different endings like in Alien 4: Ressurection, will Ali help the aliens in either killing Ripley or helping her due to Ripley being like Ali. If Ripley does have the charaistics of the Aliens, acid blood, the strength and etc.

Brilliant once again, can't wait for the next chap.

The suspence is killing me.

Nice story, the plotline is great, and I'm curious is this going into Alien 3 because this is reminding me of it pretty quickly, once again great story.