well the beginning confused me and i didn't quite understand what was happening. But at the end of the first chappy I started to understand it more. And when I did I was overcome with *Tell me there is another Chapter!* and I liked it, over all. Not normal, dark, and you followed what you were suppose to with 10% accuracy good job, look forward to reading more of your works.

Great story. It was interesting, and the clues were there - for what was happening - but they were subtle enough that it was still a surprise.

it did work. I found that fic very good. You wrote the caracters pretty well, how it was affecting them and all. Great fic, makes you want to read more of it and not stop till your done!

Very nicely done angsty whump. I particularly liked the emotional whump you included, too. Thank you for sharing!

:-)
-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

HOLY CRAP!

Nice progression of insanity! Well written.

-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

I'm very impressed! It's very easy to go over the top with this type of story, but you managed to pull it off nicely! You've also captured the characters' voices very well.
I wish I could give you some suggestions on how to improve your writing, but I can find nothing to criticize.
Wonderful job!

That was great! I mean, I don't like Shep whump that much, but this was good. And I loved the shout out to all the dead characters (and some alive, if I'm not mistaken). I mean, some I didn't get, but who could miss 'Walsh'. Not exactly a common name.

WOW! Dark and interesting look at the characters. Exceptional story
Thanks

Yikes, you pulled out all the stops! Great depiction of John and Rodney going nuts...*g* You built it up so well, it was hard to tell at first what was wrong. Very scary!

And Shep whump is always appreciated, of course.

Yay for team fic!

Great story! This would have made a neat episode. It was an original way approach to the John and Rodney h/c. It's not often we see the flip-side of Rodney's ego, but when he was weeping in the darkness I felt so bad for him! I liked how John's birthday finally ended, especially his hope that his friends would avoid bursting into song. :)

Once again, my world has been rocked! Wonderfully dark; the paranoia was palpable. Nice job!

great story got to say you had me a little worried about sheppard :)

Great fic! Loved the angst! And the bday at the end was a nice, warm way to end the fic.

I am speechless. There needs to be a whole new list of adjectives to properly describe how much I love your writing. I am completely honest when I say that you deserve to be paid for what you give to us so freely. Thank you more than I can say. ( And please write more soon!) You're awesome! God bless you.

Wow, that was truly intense!! Creepy and tense and rivetingly realistic, with a lovely comforty ending--very good reading indeed! Thanks so much for sharing!