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Saun 8/18/04 . chapter 1
AW ;_; So precious!
cheerlin 3/16/04 . chapter 1
this was very romantic...
I wished there was a person who could do that for me... *sigh* dreaming*
Ja Ne!
Debowrah Stevens 3/7/04 . chapter 1
I really liked it! But... where's the yuri sex in it. Start putting more yuri sex in it!PLEASE!
socchan 11/7/03 . chapter 1
Truth be told, I didn't really consider myself an author until I got my first flame. I'm still waiting for my second. Maybe I should make more obvious mistakes...

Loved the 'fluffy rain' line. I may have to, er, 'borrow' it. Rather ironic how Haruka contemplates taking on the hoste of hell for Michiru while walking through a snow storm. It's also interesting (for me) to read about less confident Haruka and Michiru. It's nice to think that they doubt sometimes. Plus, your style is just plain fun to read. (I read everything I could find by you at shoujoai.com and went looking for more; it didn't occur to me at the time that you might be under a different name here ;) Anyway, that's why I like your stuff.

*shrugs* You said you wanted more detail...

-socchan
Pyro Venus 11/1/03 . chapter 1
I liked it alot. I thought Haruka's determination to bring the roses to Michiru was truly in character, but you should have had Michiru wake Haruka up or something!
Cyber69 2/20/03 . chapter 1
First I'd like to say if I'm reviewing that means I liked it. Second describing why or what part I liked is one of the hardest things for me to do. Sorry for not explaining the reasons behind my really short reviews.

PS: Great series!
kino amiko 1/11/03 . chapter 1
that was sooooo sweet! -amiko
Rea-chan 8/15/02 . chapter 1
I don't know if your portrayal of Michiru was actually 'wrong' since she was sleeping in this ficlet... still... I *am* curious as to haruka's mother's reaction... and... roses? eh. Roses seem more usagis type. {smirks} Maybe Rei's. the other girls never really struck me as rose-type girls... Still, roses *do* relate feelings well; especially red roses (though I have to admit to liking the moonbeam shades better).
Aemys 7/20/02 . chapter 1
I liked it!

So sweet and fluffy..

maybe a little short, but good!
michi's ruka 12/13/01 . chapter 1
uh oh caught but so very romantic
someone 12/7/01 . chapter 1
You want honesty, aye? The beginning was confusing-why was Haruka in the middle of a snow storm-but you even that question out later on. But, where did her mom come from. In "the Drive Home" her mom wasn't in the house... uh, at least, I think... *shrugs* Anyhoo, I think the conclusion was SWEET (adorable that Haruka braved the storm for Michiru for such a simple yet lovely thing) but I want to know what her mother's thoughts were when she saw it. Keep it up!
Goddess of ArtInsanity 12/1/01 . chapter 1
I liked that short lil fic because it showed that the simple things are what

make life worthwhile. Note: I stole that quote from a commercial, but

I really like it-honest to Kame. If you dont believe me, e-mail me. You can e-mail me if you

do too. P.S. BRING BACK THE 70s!
Laura 12/1/01 . chapter 1
It was good but could have been longer.
SoulSister 12/1/01 . chapter 1
aww, that was really kawaii. good job
UsakoKou 11/30/01 . chapter 1
I have sat down and read all of the series that you have out so far ...I really like it...can't wait for the next installment
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