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A Midsummer Night's Dream
2009-08-17 . chapter 10
And then there comes the temperament Hans.
TenchiSaWaDa
2009-07-24 . chapter 10
WRITE MORE THE gODS ORDER YOU TO WRITE MORE .

WRITE I SAY WRITE

WRITE MORE
Charpie
2009-06-17 . chapter 10
Hahahaha. Extremely cute story with just the right amount of fluff in it. It was very well written and had me laughing throughout the whole thing. I especially loved the last scene.

I really liked the next generation characters that you've written about. It's really hard to find well written fics about this topic. I would love to read more about these kids. Excellent job.
ColinatorGX
2009-02-28 . chapter 10
Ahahah, this was a really nice story.
I never knew Gokudera could be this open about someone he didn't know. Especially a woman. hehehe, Your the man, Hayato!
Anyways, i also liked how you described the kids of the couples (which i agree with, incluiding Biachi x Dino), and the Gokudera's reactions.
Ill be lookin' forward to more stories like this. =)
pollenflug
2009-01-29 . chapter 10
Very cute extra chapter. Finally there's a love interest for Gokudera... would have been a pity if he ended up an old spinster.
pollenflug
2009-01-27 . chapter 9
This was a very cute and funny story. I loved that line in the last chapter: "Gokudera was propped up against the couch, asleep despite Osamu unconsciously gnawing on his head." Although I have to admit that I got pretty confused with all the names over time.

An extra chapter would be great.
ArashiAme
2009-01-25 . chapter 7
This was just too cute and funny! i could totally imagine a tiny hibari hanging of Gokudera's arm xD
???
2009-01-24 . chapter 9
Please make a bonus chapter. I love this fanfiction.
Sakicchi
2009-01-24 . chapter 8
I LOVE THIS STORY♥
I love love love it ;3; I wonder from where Osamu came from... xD
And yay for DinoxBianchi~!
Update soon please~
A Whale of a Tale
2009-01-22 . chapter 7
Pft. Very funny! I must admit that I thought you were referring to a kid!Takeshi in your other story (due, possibly, to some abuse of the 10 year bazooka again XD). Thinking about the kind of kids that Gokudera will have... well. Plus he/she'll be the youngest, which usually = most spoiled... XD
Laurasaur.
2009-01-17 . chapter 7
XD
it's such a wonderful story; it somethign that makes me laugh (:
I really want to know who stayed with Hibari for so long to have Osamu x]
lmao.
SuperCakefairy
2009-01-14 . chapter 7
hahahhah this is a cute and funny story! i love hibari's little monster and i am quite suprise at masaru knowing certain vocabulary what does a 9 year know about catfights! lol...poor gokudera lol! keep up the good work =D
Beyond Flight
2009-01-11 . chapter 5
I'm a little too lazy to log in, but I do think your story deserves a little more than four reviews. Your writing is pretty good. The only problem I really see here is the fact that you've written about Gokudera and children. Although it is an interesting idea to think about, short drabbles may not be the best way to go about it. The way I see it, writing something a little more lengthly might be nice to attract the readers attention. Your chapters at their current state are too short to enjoy, IMO.

Anyway otherwise, keep it up.
tijerita
2009-01-11 . chapter 5
I like this, because out of all the stories, it isn't centered around random yaoi, but the whole vongola family. I wasn't sure of the direction this story was going to take when i first read it, but it's quite interesting.
holyknick2
2009-01-11 . chapter 5
Great story, keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Osamu is a beast.
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