This is sooooooooo cute!

my favourite line is the "bring it on humans"!

absoluetly love it :D

toodles and love oky verlo

love your story and alterntive timeline.

I love it! This idea is a possibility that my mind hadn't even begun to consider, I find you're perspective on it quite interesting.

Oh, nice look at the alternative for Duzell. Well versed.

I liked Duzell's discovery of the tastes of food. You should have added the chocolate incident as well.

This could be even better if you played up his fears and anxieties of losing first his powers and then his old self.