"It did help that his usual outfit included a long coat, but Emil got the feeling that Richter could have worn nothing and still walked determinedly forward with that same, apathetic expression."

That gave me a very nice mental image. <3

so cute, made me smile! just finished the game, and instantly went on the prowl for some RichterEmil. seriously, they are too adorable. i really liked how you didn't make Richter too harsh or too caring. favourite line- "it's called 'being a man." whoa, Richter, you're too cool.

:3 teehee that was cute! Even if there really was no shounen-ai. ^.^;

Oh you must write more! That was adorable! x3

Aw... There was no actual Yaoi. DX But oh well! XD It was still well-written and filled with adorable fluffiness. You forgot your disclaimer though. XD I love how Emil always has that one, little, bold moment in your RichterEmil shots. X3 I can't believe the Inn-Employees thought Emil was a girl though. All in all, it was lovely and made my mind wander to beautiful and wondorous things. XD

I'm beginning to hate my username. DX I've been mentioned twice in people's author's notes(Including yours) and both times my name has changed from the normal to ".Game". DX I think i'm gonna get rid of those damned dots.

-TRG

(And, again, i'm glad I could inspire you!)

Lol, true..
There wasn't any shounen-ai... Whoops.
OH WELL. T'was so cute...
MAKE IT MORE THAN A ONESHOT!!
CONTINUE.
CONTINUE..
CONTINUE...
Lol, though, if you think about it.. you can really add another few chaps into this.. o.o
AND I WOULD WRITE SOME RICHTER/EMIL FLUFF... If I had the time... T.T