 Meiza 2009-01-08 . chapter 1Great job keeping these two in character. Best of all, it gives me a pretty good idea what it would of been like if the bots HAD been forced to ultimately leave Earth and trust Sari in Fanzone's care. I love how grouchy he is, hiding a really nice guy underneath it all.
Sari, eh, kinda bratty, but after all that's happened, I think she's allowed a bit of leeway there. |