i really liked it! i truly loved how descriptive it was. (this is going to sound cliche) but i felt like i was there and i could easily imagine the sounds of an airplane and the turbulence. all in all i really like this!

omigosh! i cant believe that i didnt notice it before! this was one of the first setojou fics i ever read and then later on i read and fell in love w/ marionette and i never noticed that you were the same author! why couldnt i see it before!

This probably had to be the the first plane scene that i have read where it actually made any sense. Transitions were flawless and their personalities shown through but the only thing ive noticed about your stories is that they dont provide much "relationship development" in between. just commenting that people dont all of a sudden change their attitudes or ideas about someone in an instant(they disliked each other and then all of a sudden are on top of each other)

Well i love your stories all the same so its in my favs .

read ya later

Lamo, wow, loved it. I mean it. Never thought i'd see a well written plane scene for those two, and the transition to the restroom was flawless. Definitely in character. Awesome.

you really are a slut on the inside! Jou was "ready to go all the where right then and there" or whatever that line was! perv! :D i love it! so i really enjoyed this story and think you should write more soon. there has not been enough Kaiba/Jou stories of late and i'm upset. go for it! write whatever craziness your mind has in it! do it. review you later_

Short and sweet. :)

I really liked how you portrayed unhealthy tension and passion between Kaiba and Jounouchi. I tend to skip fics that use the Americanized dub names for Yugiou, but I think your stories are an exception. Very well written. I can actually see this happening.

I liked it. I hope you might consider an epilogue or making this into a real story? If not, at least it was good.

Shana: I really didn't expect any less from you! Great job! Oh and if you're wondering where Shiroi is, she broke her arms and got a sore throat, so I wouldn't put it as a very good day for her. -Sigh- Oh, and she says that she love the fic! And didn't get the riddle in the previous one. Actually, me too! -Grins- Can you please tell us?

-xoxoSHANA

Shiroi(: