Well...as a first kiss goes that was...Pretty romantic, even thoug is face was probably peeling. Other than that it was cute!!

This is an awesome story as I have told you several times already! I am so glad you updated it finally, the new chapter is so cute. Jazzy is such a great character and I love how you keep Bernard so innocent and cute ^__^

Evae

Why do you have to make it so short! Gosh! I can't wait for the next one. Keep going

LOL! So cute! :D Update soon. <3

wow, well good luck, you're gonna need it.

haha, the nervous game, great memories. I love how Bernard is so shy when it comes to physical stuff, he's like a pre teen, he doesn't know what to do! Oh gosh, wait till the first kiss, he'll be like, "Okay, great game, I think that was enough."

LOL! xD Update soon!

aw so nice! We must you leave a cliffy.TT oh well hope you update soon!

Poor Bernard!! He's an elf and he can't think of having a kissing game... Although I can't wait!

Lol! You must update! I love it :D

Short but sweet. lolz, an elf w/ a caffeine buzz... Keep it coming! (ROFL will they be playing strip poker? Ya I'm bad, I know!)

Oh man, betting money? Yikes!! Don't lose it all!

Okay, great start! B is cute in this. Poor elf, getting sunburn! Anywho, I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!

I really like this story. Keep going

Wow, great story! I love the take that you've taken on Bernard, you've captured his character well. In my opinion anyway.

Again, Great story!