I would like to see where this story goes.

Can't wait for more.

AH! please dont die Elliot! Please update soon!

NO! Nettie, say it isn't so! Please post soon - can't stand not knowing what will happen next.

Wow...lymphoma. Did not see that coming. Awesome start to the story thus far and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Geese i was near tears

Thats also because my friends 6 year old sister passed of leukemia 4 months ago

well you did a great job writing this and i cant wait for more

Update Soon!

oh my gosh! what a start nettie! i cannot wait for more! :)

rach

Well yer just on a story writing roll aren't ya? This is really good, but I'm afraid I don't know what Non-Hodgkin’s Lymphoma is. It must be fatal right? Well anywho, this is a really god start, to what I assume is going to be a really good story, so I'll keep my eye on it(:

I'm impressed - usually it's Elliot taking care of Olivia when the tragedy happens... good start so far.

So yeah, now I'm in tears...begging for more, lol. The totally blank and lost expression on Elliot broke my heart. And when all he wanted from Liv was for her to hold him that's what got to me. Update soon and keep up the great work!

Another great story from you. The way you write the emotions of Liv and El is unreal. I can't wait for more of this story!

Please let it be a medical mistake. The doctor didn't say he had it for sure, just that it looked like it. Let it be something like Mono or an infection of some sort that can be cured. Please make Elliot go in for further testing where he and Liv will discover its nothing serious and El will pull through.

Please, please, please. Oh, and keep Kathy away from El. I hate on the show when Kathy shows up (kids in tow) whenever El is hurt making a BIG SHOW of being the wife and mommy, but not really giving a shit whether El lives or dies, she just wants everyone to see her and give HER sympathy and attention.

Pix

This is so sad. But I love that he turns to Liv in teh midst of despair.

Good heavens woman! You have done it again! Another fantastic start to a story that has sucked me in and wanting more after just one chapter. Kudos! Loving the spin on it and new approach. PLEASE update soon.

Nettie I love your stories. They are always so full of emotion and so well written. They are a real treat, and I'm sure this one will be just the same. The opening image of her flipping through a book with a man on the front was a nice touch. It just shows how much a little attention to detail can do. And can I say how much I loved Bob the cab driver? The whole time he was present I was smiling. I found it particularly humorous that he kept calling Olivia "ma'am." Maybe that's just my mind at four in the morning, but I loved him and would like to see him again, if you'll consider it. I also have to say just how touching it was to have Olivia comforting Elliot with that hug/embrace. It's just so selfless and I've seen it done in movies and on TV before and it makes me get a little emotional every time. Sometimes people just need a hug, and Elliot obviously did. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story, and you can bet that I will be looking up what Non-Hodgkin’s Lymphoma is so I have an idea of how sad this story is going to turn out to be. But whatever you do with it, I'm sure it's going to be wonderful! Can't wait for an update! And sorry for rambling so much. :)

-Trish

And so the shittiness of life continues.

I would have kissed away his pain too. Just a lot more and on the mouth

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He's so cute. *Sigh*

Oh the drama. I love it.

I've needed new ff like lots.

Glad you've posted this. Did I ever read the final ending?

Can't wait for more hun.

I love reading and remembering.

Lol.