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Mary-La
2010-01-01 . chapter 3
This story had me in tears, smiles and outright laughs.
I love it!
<3
InlovewithDracoMalfoy
2009-12-05 . chapter 3
hmm it was good
paula
2009-09-19 . chapter 3
oh, lovely. what a well-written and good story. i haven't read one involving Hermione still hung up on Ron and an insecure Draco. This was so sweet. Two thumbs up!
Dusty Brown
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so beautifully wirtten. I'm in my college math class at the moment, bored out of my mind, and your story provided a wonderful reprieve.
DarlingDearestDeadForever
2009-06-15 . chapter 3
It was so real that I held my breath for the last chapter, and this ache just came out of nowhere in my heart. I teared up though I didn't cry. Makes me wish that a love like this can actually happen to people.
Sweetly Sarcastic
2009-06-11 . chapter 3
This is amazing and makes me feel completely incompetent. Your characters were so vivid and real and I didn't cry, but I came pretty close, which is an achievement for me, and just, wow. Great story. With some minor tweaks you could make it general fiction and get it published, it's that good.
daniela1417
2009-06-09 . chapter 3
that was one of the best stories i have read in a long time. thank you and keep up the great work :)
Gryfferin Princess
2009-03-27 . chapter 3
Wow. . . this story is just, so beautiful. . . I teared up! :)
Jessica
2009-03-27 . chapter 3
you've done a great job with this story. it's very well written, and it flows well. although it was a little confusing at first with all the back and forth stuff. eventually i got used to it and it started to make sense to me.
Fernsfairie
2009-03-25 . chapter 3
Shit.

I can't tell what genre these stories you write are; frankly, I'm not inclined to know.

I just know that they are DAMN good.
paula
2009-02-15 . chapter 3
thanks for writing this. I loved it. there is so much crappy fanfic that it's wonderful when I finally come across a story that is well written. what I liked about your story is that the characterizations are believable yet it could stand alone as an original short story (just change the names) Well done!
nonhalema
2009-02-11 . chapter 3
Thank you for the beautiful end
veronica
2009-02-04 . chapter 3
Completely touching and beautifully written.
Lalia x
2009-02-01 . chapter 3
That was sweet and mature. I liked the way you handled their situation. I'm glad Hermione and Draco got their happy ending. :)
asloversgo
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
This is everything a story is supposed to be. I LOVED it.
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