Was pretty good. In the first one are they a couple and... doing the nasty? Or was that just my brean (bob, who resides at 1800 the gutter, in the cardboard box superglued to the spot lane) acting up? XD

That was probably one of the most hurtful things anyone could say. I wonder what on earth Fred was thinking, perhaps you could write a companion piece from his point of view? For the sake of my sanity and the love of Fred I'm not putting this in my missing bits from canon, although i accept that such things do happen in reality. Why is it that people can do some terrible things and be forgiven but you can't take a few harsh words back? It's funny but that goes against what we're always told, 'sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never harm me'.

i liked this one. and angelina deserves as much. i hate it when people say that moving on crap. plenty do, but not every loves or lives or is so SELFISH in the same way. it's not always about what's easier for you after all. so nice we half fanfic authors to make sense of jk's cookie-cutter sucking-up epilogue. :)

i liked it! im not sure y but this is one of my favorite fanfics

I love the twins so much which is why I've never been able to write a story of one of them dead, so sad. So well done, so impressed.

Well, it's good. Not perfect, I think, but quite good. I really enjoyed the first bit! But it seems a ´little hurried at the end - like you said in your A/N, you wanted to get it posted - quickly. But it was entertaining anyway, that's the most important. So well done!

That was very powerful, I love the way you put adverbs successively, it's very beautiful and emotionnal, especially when you read it aloud. Very good. I love the relation with Angelina, George's evolution, George's duality. That's great, really.

This is really good. Kind of stream of consiousness-flashes of time kind of thing. I like your use of the headings.

Lovely and heart-breaking and just perfect, of course. Definitely a favorite. I mourn for your net loss, hope you get it back soon! Thanks for sharing, love.

Wow, very good.

Ouch. This is really good, as always! (I've missed your HP fic!) I love how you portrayed the twins-as-one-unit in the beginning.