I like the way this (Buffy/Clark) ended.. not happily ever after, but not sad either.. just more adventure to look forward too.

I finally finished this fic, and I really enjoyed it!

As I said before, you should probably get a beta, or proofread much more carefully, but the content of the fic (plot, action, dialogue, ect..) was outstanding.

It was refreshing to read a fan fiction where, Clark and whom ever he is paired with, do not spend the entirity of the fic mooning over each other, with a bit of plot and action thrown in almost as an afterthought.

Very exciting chapter! You are great at moving the story along. I love the twist with Riley and Lex.

My only complaint is the use of the word "soulmate". But this is just a pet peeve of mine, because it is so overused in fan fiction that it has become cliche`d.

Again, amazing character reactions! I am really impressed! You have put things in that have enhanced the plot and draw us in even more.

I like the connection between Giles and Swann. It makes sense, and gives us a clearer picture of what is going on in the plot.

First, I have to say this story is amazing! You are doing what many crossovers either forget to do, or don't do well, and that is showing character reactions to the crossover characters.

Another thing I really like is that you have plausable reasons for events to take place, and you portray them in a believable way. (Clark having to reveal his secret to Buffy's friends)

The main problem I have noticed with this is that your prose is littered with typos, and wording mistakes. This interupts the flow of the story, and makes reading it a bit of a chore. I would suggest carefully proofreading and/or getting a beta.

Example from your text:

Riley: (Not to mention he shot fire out of his ear) I think you meant "eyes".

There have been numerous other instances where you have either used wrong words, or the wrong tense of a word, and the reader has to stop and make the mental adjustment of what they assume you meaant to say.

Back to the plus side, I also love the way you are portraying Riley. You have kept it very close to his cannonic character, and you haven't bashed him while showing stress in his relationship with Buffy. You have portrayed that situation in a very believable way.

Lex is such a jerk! Awesome story

nice sequel? stupid giles

"So, he thought to himself, what happens next?"

And I keep asking myself the same thing.

that was amazing ending I hope you continue with this series might I suggest my picking up where you left off if you ever do another one

another awesome chapter

That was a good battle scene. Too bad Clark was weakened by Kryptonite. Full-powered Clark could take Amad out single-handed.
I wonder what will happen to Buffy and the others? And what about Initiative?

nice clark saved yay
is there a pairing
will buffy dump finn

awesome chapter

awesome chapter

Forrest is such an **
wats this buffy begin clark soulmate?