Wonderful and marvelous and fun. Mainly fun. Thank you.

Bahaha! That was very, very cute!

hahahahahaha! silly elves...

Nela

Wow, you had me going there for a while! Great twist ;)

Good ending part too :) I really enjoyed reading it!

Ma, oh man. You got me.

I thought this was going to be a twincest, plus another incest, a foursome, and with a voyeur.

But golly day!

D

OMG! you had me going there and then I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes :) This certainly has been one of the most entertaining stories I have read. Good job! It would be nice to read some more stories about the twins, that is if you wish to write about them more, but do not feel pressured to on my account. I have enjoyed reading a lot of your stories and look forward to read more LOTR stories you may write.

-DragonPhoenix87

A wonderful double entendre! I loved how it went right to the end. Very well written, and hilarious. There were some great details throughout which really added to the setting & conversation.

Plus, I rather loved seeing something of Elladan & Elrohir from you.

“Three,” she whispered, twisting the cloth in her hands. “I need three of you.”

This line gets me every time! LOL!

This is great! You write with a good succinct style and the characters are lovely- rather raffish and wolfishly anticpating a 'tussle', they get a fight instead. I love the humour in this too. Eomer's oblivious to the scheming and I laughed when they thought Lothiriel might like to watch!

well done! I loved it!

Even after reading this a few times, I'm still chuckling over it. Very funny how you mislead your readers!

Lia

very suggestive... I admit that I almost clicked out, but then realised that you hadn't written anything like that before and hadn't included any warnings, so I admit that I was more than happy to continue reading. I like the challenge you gave the Shield maidens. very nice... And I thought it was a brilliant story! Well done!

Nela

Oh. My. Word. D'you know, normally I expect something like this - I do, truly - but you had me totally going and I almost didn't finish it! I was completely taken. You just took me hard, and I appreciate it - I enjoy being taken occasionally when it's done well. This was great.

**Snort**

Wicked author! I quite thought you meant something else - and was quite surprised at you. But all is very innocent - and I like the boldness of the would-be shield maiden.

Jay

Rereading it still gives me joy. Well done!