 xNymphadoraX 2009-01-09 . chapter 1I just love your Severus. You don't have to change his stature, or his nose or hair; you don't play that silly 'Severus in someone else's body' game that so many authors do. He's still our boy; somewhat unconventionally attractive, but quite relentlessly sexy in his own right. Very nicely done. Despite myself, I actually enjoyed the fact that you left the lady's identify unknown. I read it 3x: once imagining Narcissa, then Bella, and then, of course, Lily. It was quite a different story each time. I'm sure Severus would have adored it. Happy Birthday, Severus! |