Good, but on my computer at least there were no commas or quotation marks and that's pretty annoying.

Yet another great set of chapters, and the last one has a great little surprise at the very end. About time, as far as I'm concerned.

And with that, we see the team more or less back into full readiness. What's exactly on Fox's mind as to where the crew will be off to next? Only you know. We'll all have to wait until you've written it.

Keep it up!

Even though this is the 6th part of a series. I kind of like just reading this. There's enough detail to get a feel for what's going on without having to read an exposition. Consider skipping the exposition sometimes in your future work. Intentionally or not, your writing is good enough to avoid it.

Im a big fan of your Eternity series and im happy to see another section.

Actually I'm catching on just fine, Fara and Fox have a baby, and fly with the team, albiet the fact they are almost dirt poor. And I don't mind, I've said numerous times that I applaud authors that choose to write Foc x Fara as long as they refrain from access Krystal hate, which you refrain from.

I'm excited to see yet another story in this series (and what looks to be the last one as well, unfortunately). You've always done a great job with this 'version' of Fox and his crew, basically showing their lives (which is something that's rarely shown) on a day to day basis, among many other things.

I look forward to reading the rest of this story.

I absolutely loved the Butterfly Photographs fic that you wrote.

And I am enjoying this one quite nicely too...

No errors what-so-ever. I tediously and meticulously searched for spelling errors and grammatical errors but could find none to point out. Once or twice I thought that the sentence structure was a bit weird but that was only because of the words that you used, so it was perfectly fine in the end.

Very good excellent portrayal of basically life...this is what people fail to grasp about the lives of mercenaries and the hardships that everyone endures after wars...

The rations and everything...excellent, just excellent.

And the fact that Fox now has a kid...I was a bit confused at first cause I didn't see Krystal anywhere but I guess this is one of those fics where Krystal doesn't play any part or role. Or maybe she does in the later chapters?

Well, I enjoyed reading the sad and semi-dark chapter anyways. Cause this is probably what really happens after war.

Well I hope I was the first reviewer!

Best Wishes,
Krys