this is the same aldamonburst just not logged in lol. it's mostly the grammar that makes it confusing.

i like the fic but your grammar SUCKS! it makes ur fic hard to understand.

Oh man it was great,will you uptade it soon?

Pretty good story. But if it's not too much trouble, could you work on the grammar? The story's difficult to understand with your current writing style, like how you sometimes use the wrong version of a word, ect. Other than that, pretty good.

And Dr. Light makes an appearance (well next chapter). I wonder what Dr. Wily would do if Zero and Layer gave HIM grandchildren. For that matter, I wonder what he would do if Bass and ROLL gave him grandchildren. Probably have a heart attack since he would be in the same family as Light.

Fefnir biting and calling Shadow a faker was hilarious. And there is nothing wrong adding Shonen Jump to a story. This story is cracktastic, keep going!

I bet Harpuia is Sigma’s kid. That or Vile’s.

Ryuk wasn’t the bad guy in “Death Note”. Light was. That much was obvious since the beginning. Ryuk was more neutral. I’m just glad Light dies in the end.

The part where Phantom just comes in with the key had me cracking up.

Keep up the excellent work.

This was just too funny. I would of thought though that since “Command Mission” takes place after “X8” that Zero and Layer would know each other.

Beware of babies that smirk evilly. Did Alia cheat on X? I hope not.

XAlia, ZeroLayer, and AxlCinnamon all the way!

i just read the new chapter i like the part that zero calls
harpuia a green devil

This is good keep it up.

You should bring in other characters like Signas, Douglas, and Layer. Layer volunteering to help Zero take care of the babies would be funny as he-ll. Zero would be all surprised that Layer can get the babies under control and have them act like perfect little angels. Just picture Zero wide-eyed and jaw-dropped ‘cause Layer did something that he couldn’t.

Why don't you give the babies sugar and see how that turns out?

Aw... SO CUTE! (Hugs the babies!) THANK YOU! AND UPDATE SOON!

i like its a cute story and the baby guardians and lol that
x and alia let zero baby sit them for the whole month i want to see if zero will handle it for the month especially taking care of qaudruplets and seeing him giving up

i also like the story of zero baby sit the baby guardians
and its funny that levithan and phantom are crying the whole time and that harpuia is breaking his toys and fefnir biting the wires and make zero angry about fefnir being naughty to him